句子修改-variety and conciseness

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

19. They cannot think clearly.
改进: They cannot think straight.

21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

44. In this continued process, people make progress.
改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.